The Voice - Poem by Noah Body

Inside me there is this voice
That seeks to end all choice

It tells me I'm no good
And end it I should

It harps on all my wrongs
Ending all of my songs

It says I deserve the pain
Standing out in the rain

Tear drops fall forever

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Comments (32)

  1. WalkinOnSunshine

    Its a beautiful emotional poem, but you are above this…always know that.

    November 19, 2016
    1. noahbody

      Thank you. I try to be.

      November 19, 2016
  2. GoldenPig2012

    That just pisses me off. Inside me, there’s a voice that tells me to shut the hell up, I don’t know anything, I’ve got jack shit to add to life. That voice pisses me off, too.

    November 19, 2016
    1. noahbody

      Yes the voice pisses me off too sometimes. Little mother fucker just won’t shut the hell up.

      November 19, 2016
      1. GoldenPig2012

        “Sometimes”? Really? eye roll

        Not a “little” mother fucker, honey, a screamer.

        November 19, 2016
        1. noahbody

          Yes. A screamer.

          November 19, 2016
  3. glittergraphicsgirl

    I totally agree with Dani. Please know it is a beautiful, emotional poem, but you definitely are above all of that. Please don’t let it drag you down.

    November 19, 2016
    1. noahbody

      Thank you but I am down already.

      November 19, 2016
      1. glittergraphicsgirl

        I had a lot of troubles that way for years, but finally I got better. Most of the time it’s almost as it I don’t have Bipolar. There are still problems, but I am able to fight against it.

        November 19, 2016
        1. noahbody

          Good for you

          November 19, 2016
          1. glittergraphicsgirl

            Thanks so much.

            November 19, 2016
            1. noahbody

              You’re welcome.

              November 19, 2016
      2. GoldenPig2012

        Hmph. Then buck the fuck up. You’ve come this far, you can get the fuck up from down. I need you. Man, I hate saying that, but, it’s true. Get up, just get the hell up, we need you.

        November 19, 2016
        1. noahbody

          I will try.

          November 19, 2016
          1. GoldenPig2012

            That’s all any of us can do. Period.

            November 19, 2016
            1. noahbody

              Yep

              November 19, 2016
  4. GoldenPig2012

    noahbody, not a fan of one syllable responses and you know it. We’ll go from here.

    November 19, 2016
    1. noahbody

      OKAY. That’s two syllables. LOL!

      November 19, 2016
      1. GoldenPig2012

        Ha ha ha ha ha ha………………love it!

        November 20, 2016
        1. noahbody

          November 20, 2016
  5. fierylady

    Teardrops flowing
    Heal the heart
    And Soul!

    November 19, 2016
    1. noahbody

      Thank you. I sure hope so

      November 20, 2016
  6. DeeinFL

    Truly so emotional. Always know you never deserve that, my friend. Your tears are not the only ones that fall…your friends teardrops flow along with yours.

    November 20, 2016
    1. noahbody

      Thank you my friend….

      November 20, 2016
  7. notthinking

    Like Dee said, you deserve better. You have friends, if we are so honored to be counted among them.

    November 20, 2016
    1. noahbody

      you are counted amongst them….. Thank you.

      November 20, 2016
      1. notthinking

        Hahaha! Are you calling me ancient

        November 20, 2016
        1. noahbody

          Not at all. I myself feel the word “amongst” is not as exactly archaic yet. But it’s getting there. Hell I still use it sometimes, when it feels right.

          November 20, 2016
  8. belladora

    No room but that says it all. No preaching just praying.

    November 21, 2016
    1. noahbody

      November 21, 2016
  9. magnocrat

    It’s the voice of self- condemnation we all get from time to time, and comes from a sensative judgement of ourselves.
    We see our strengths and our weaknesses through the eye of conscience.

    November 26, 2016
    1. noahbody

      Yes we do. Thank you.

      November 26, 2016